wrote:
Hey everyone I just wanted to introduce myself and say I am excited to
say that Our business has created a New Proprietary Formula. Its
stronger than anything on the market and we back it with a 100%
satisfaction guarantee or your money back. Did I mention we will also
Hand Deliver and install The Mantel In no later than 2 weeks. If you
have the time check out our site at http://stonemantels.ruqqa.com.


No offense, because I do not intend this as an insult, but it would
serve you well to employ an editor.

Poor grammar reflects poorly on the overall quality of a company. You
may have the highest quality product and service available, but when
people are reading a website with poor grammar, they often infer (even
subconsciously) that the product must have a similar lack in quality.

I am specifically referring to your haphazard use of capitalization in
this usenet post and on your blog/site.


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-MIKE-

"Playing is not something I do at night, it's my function in life"
--Elvin Jones (1927-2004)
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http://mikedrums.com

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