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John Rumm
 
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Phil Addison wrote:

http://www.diyfaq.org.uk/testing/pow...s/drillfaq.htm


Typos:

in Expansive Bits "an the single cutting flute has a spur..." "an"
should be "and"

in hole saws: "Professional hole saws blades " few too many plurals
there. (in fact we don't really need the "blade" bit IMHO)

http://www.diyfaq.org.uk/testing/powertools/drill.htm
http://www.diyfaq.org.uk/testing/pow...s/mitresaw.htm
http://www.diyfaq.org.uk/testing/powertools/sander.htm


Under Rotary Disc in sander types, should the "Technique is Everything"
paragraph actually be in the next table where usage is discussed?

There is a spurious extra carridge return in "onto
which slips a sanding belt"

In nailers and staplers: missing capital letter on start of second para.

General style sheet comment - any chance of a bit more leading between
lines? The table entries are nice and easy to read, but the main body
text is rather tightly line spaced. (The CSS definition for BODY seems
to be the culprit, currently it has line height specified as 100% rather
than "normal" (normal usually being approx 120%))

So:

BODY { margin-left: 5%; margin-right: 5%; background: white; color:
black; font-size: medium; font-weight: normal; line-height: normal;
font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif }



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Cheers,

John.

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