John Rumm wrote:
You know the drill by now!

Any comments on:

http://www.internode.co.uk/diyfaq/anglegrinder.htm

(I wanted something to test a new install of ViaVoice, so there you go!)

Random comments.
Some just things that jar when I read them, some speakos.

I'd lose the 'also' in the second paragraph.
And the plurals on bars, sheets, angles.
I'd add "However, using diamond disks to cut or shape metals (especially
steel) will rapidly destroy them", a the end of the "disks" section.

"they will also deliver", replace with "and".
"On the budget tools", lose "the".
"maybe" = "may be"
"quality tools also", lose "also"
"his highly" = "is highly"
"expect to get" = "get"
"use of an" = "use an"
"you will also" ="will also"