On Mon, 17 Jan 2011 09:13:39 -0800 (PST), Jim Wilkins
wrote:

On Jan 17, 11:07*am, Lewis Hartswick wrote:
....

I'm still trying to learn clear and concise technical writing. Should
I give up?

jsw

No. Not at all if your writing for the appropriate people. Just
don't try to do it for the "masses". :-)
* * ...lew...

That bad? Here I assume a more knowledgeable audience than in some
other groups.

My goal is to write clear test procedures and equipment manuals.

Keep striving, Jim. Yours is a very important goal, IMHO.
It'll come...if you let it.

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-- Ralph Waldo Emerson