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Dave Hinz wrote:
On Thu, 13 Dec 2007 21:46:59 -0800 (PST), wrote:
On Dec 13, 10:05 pm, "Stupendous Man" wrote:
I have corrected the document foor you.
Here it is in proper English
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I'm responding to a later post with this
one. In it you asked "Really? Which of
my specific points do you feel I am
either wrong, or
insincere about?"
I don't feel you were insincere in
anything you said.
But what irked me was some of the
comments you made painted with a wide
brush.

When it comes to purchasing products with the label "Made in China", Caveat
Emptor--let the buyer beware. Generally, consumers equate these three words
with cheap and shoddy products. Now, "Made In China" also spells
"Danger".

as a man on the earth, I'm sorry for some misfortunes caused by some
"Made in China".
every consumer including me abhors shoddy products.


Oh, bull****.
http://www.productrecallwatch.com/
enter "China" into the search box. Your country has put poison in our
drugs, our toothpaste, our cosmetics, our pet food, and our childrens
toys.


And your country has been responsible
for contracting those offshore
manufacturers. Your country's retailers
are supposedly responsible for QC, and
dropped the ball. China's manufacturing
industry may be putting out lousy
products, but who's buying them?

Lead paint seems to be a large part of
your gross national
product. And a month ago, you sold me


He sold you nothing. China sold you
nothing. You bought that in your country
from one of your own retailers. Those
are the guys mentioned above with the QC
issues.

a toy which metabolizes into a
coma-inducing drug (Aqua-dots), because the adhesive that does so was a
few pennies per batch cheaper than the one that was specified.

Once, is an accident. Twice, coincidence. 38 times a month, is enemy
action.


If that's truly the case, then identify
the enemy. Hint: it's not China.

I urge everyone to talk to their
congressmen and tell them to
revoke China's "most favored trade nation" status. Friends like China,
we don't need.

so what we can do is that never consume shoddy proucts whether it
"Made in China" or "Made in Moon"


The moon's manufacturers (what drugs are YOU on?) haven't tried to
poison my kids or my pets so far. China has, repeatedly.

AS a man in the street, I'm glad to know various comments about China
which come from the rest of world. Let me know what they are
thinking about China.
as a chinese ,I'm working hard to change : what i can change.


Yeah right.

by the way,
Merry Christmas to everyone


Oh, **** off, you lying hypocrite.


My original post responded to you saying
that "And yes, I know I'm answering
either a troll or an idiot." I said it
looked like I was too. The above comment
about telling him to **** off and
calling him a hypocrite pretty well
drives it home.

be carefule when you consume whether it "Made in China" or "Made in
Moon"


No. Obey the ****ing laws in the country you're selling stuff to.

And yes, I know I'm answering either a troll or an idiot.


Have a nice Christmas.

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